Friday, December 3, 2010

I want no differences & distances between you and mee!

I am lone in crowd ,
I am silent and loud.
Haven't felt this way in long,
You are neither around nor along.
Music has turned noise,
Silence has become my voice.
It was never this way before,
The distance is only becoming more.
It was never a struggle before to talk,
Everything was special even a silent walk.
Nothing has changed really, we just don't seem to show,
But some thing doesnot feel ok I am sure you know.
we can't let this wither.
And you don't like this either,
It's neither a battle nor a lone game,
There is no winning/losing and no place for blame.
Trying hard to leave you complete and glad,
Our emotions aren't different,its woven be it happy or sad.
There seem to be clouds all through the way & lotta pain,
But hope soon it will disappear and it will be clear sky again.
For now, I Sure know that the view is blurred
And I'am awaiting that we both understand & feel heard!
There is nothing more important than Thee!
I want no differences & distances between you and mee!
U and I just needs to become us and wee
Coz there can't be differences & distances between you and mee!

15 comments:

  1. very gud poem barkha ......seems like an experience when i read this poem.....you really have a nice way of writing, its very simple and jus not complicated, loved it, well done

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  2. @ D - thanks... glad that you liked it! And yes my style of writing is kept simple intentionally...for me a poem does not mean a flowery language alone it means emotions which should touch hearts!

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  3. @ All - Who ever loved it and liked it ..request u to leave ur names as this sad blog does not show names

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  4. visited your blog after a long time,you made it worth again.. very nice poem.. keep adding more stuff.. emotions redefined.. all the best

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  5. very nice poem...loved it...i think it flowing naturally...enjoyed reading it...one thing I like about ur writings is that it roots to some common emotions

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  6. @ Mo & Don - Thanks a lot:) for reading and taking time to comment!!! U guys made my day and motivate me to write more!

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  7. This poem is like astrological predictions. Connects to similar emotions. Get into script writing to take your talent to the next level. :)

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  8. This poem is like astrological predictions. Connects to similar emotions. Get into script writing to take your talent to the next level. :)

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  9. The best poem is that whose worked-upon unmagical passages come closest, in texture and intensity, to those moments of magical accident.

    keep rocking & writing

    :)

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  10. nice one barkha! :)

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  11. great barkha!!!!
    keep the good work on...

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