Thursday, February 19, 2009

The Proposal - I love you!

This is a poem written from a boy's perspective capturing the dilemma,pressure and confusion he goes through for a simple proposal..Did I just say simple well then read on...

Today I am going to tell you
Something which has been for long due
Unsure what stopped me for so long from letting you know
Cliche but every time I see you my blood pressure is at all time low
Don't remember from when I have been spending sleepless nights,
Trying out all the clothes in my wardrobe from the wisteria's to whites!
I bought a new sports one after the black leather shoe,
And I m still confused which one you would like the black or blue

My best buddies stayed over last night, we scripted what I must say & how
Phew.. a million retakes they asked me to look into the eye & take a bow
I was stammering, none of us were sure which way was the best
They finally left and when I was about to sleep and take some rest
I looked around and found the room to be in a total mess
I practiced in front of the mirror but the fear was no less
However I moved on to the next
Where should I take you? which place would be the best?

Should I arrange for a candle lit dinner with violins and roses?
I guess thats the way in movies a confident & romantic guy proposes?
Puzzled should I call u sweetheart,honey,baby what should I say?
Should I try it in the round about way?

Will you like it if I kiss your palms & complement gorgeous?
Will try to appear cool even when I 'm freaking nervous?
Should I add I cant live without you?
The day I first saw you I knew
You are the one about whom every night I dream
You are the queen of my realm
Should I say every wish of yours I will fulfill
Never let a tear drop from ur eye every worry every sorrow I will kill
Will buy you all the happiness all the riches in the world
Will move mountains, buy u d stars and moon if u say a word
Or should I say I love you like mad and love u like crazy
I want to be your slave baby

Laughs... everything I jus said is true
I was and I was yet not trying to impress you
Was wondering if you will understand what I mean?
If I simply say I love you without adding sheen?
With just a heart true, feelings pure and intentions clean?
                           Will you understand what I mean?


21 comments:

  1. even a guy wouldn't have felt so romantic while proposing. I think yu ae really good in understaning emotions than people. U can become a gr8 consellor. Really nice creation and i love this

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  2. Lol .. thx Don and abt counselling will think if brand management doesn work he he alternate stream may be wat say ??? and yeah i swear i myself find it so cute just love it man ... this is a readymade script for my Dream boy lol he just has to say this to woo me man

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  3. Dont just stop by thanking. Ithink u shud create more wonerful pieces like these

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  4. Oh ho .... Sidney Sheldon in the making !!!

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  5. hey and i cud probably borrow this for my future guy...its reilly too cute i say :)

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  6. Hey Barkha.......
    i ve finally read it....sry for the delay...Emotions and feelings are jus seen flowing out spontaneously ....very expressive...hope u get some one soon for you...
    cheers...

    Ashish

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  7. @Vaish: lolz n thx and i have never read any of Sidney Sheldon's wrk so i should grab one now after reading your comment and abt borrowing it.. sure honey i will personally help him rehearse the lines he he :)

    @ Ash - Thx for the comments and neva mind read it as n when u find time :) and ya thx but i dont want any1 at the moment but wen i look out it will be a sm1 like the one described in this poem:)

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  8. a very cute poem... pehla pehla pyar types.. tooo many thoughts n too much confusion... very cute innocent n pure feeling...

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  9. its really good. it will suit for all my unknown friend. continue your gd work

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  10. @poo - thx :) yes i love it as much as i love the song pehla nasha :)

    @Satish - sorry frd i cant get u .. who is this ?

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  11. cute one babe... should hve read tid b4 i met ma guy:)

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  12. Lolz thx. hey not too late ask RaP(Raju@Paddy =Rap) to propose u again

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  13. ur rite i guess this poem is for me..n plz ask amita to read it n thn i guess she wil understand abishek . n hope even ur guy does knw all thz tricks to pamper u...

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  14. @ Ashish Bhaiya - Yeah every1 likes to be pampered by their partner ...so lets hope for the best ! And ma guy better be good at all this :P

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  15. Hey its amazing..Beautifully written...Awesome :)

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  16. @ Prachi - Thx so much :) Thx for reading it and taking out time to comment.. if u wld like to read more of my work u can add urself as a follower :)

    @ Chiki - thx boy :) and also Thx so muchto u for reading,appreciating and sharing it wit frds :)Stay hooked and become a follower

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  17. if i would have got it before my marriage I would have proposed my wife once more(with this).

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  18. hey...good one...but i have personally relied on the eyes n the smile on her face before uttering or mumbling the magical sound of the three words...never actually thought so much...men will be just men...atleast a few would agree ..what say ? TN

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