Have you ever given it a thought
Or whatever your loved one said you simply bought?
A lot of things they would have said
But if only between the lines you had read.
If you had tried to delve deeper,
You would have seen things the way they failed to appear.
Coz behind every nothing there is actually a lot.
May be you failed to understand the hidden thought.
Behind every I dont care der was so much concern
May be you never realised, atleast once they expected you to turn
By every leave me alone,
They meant don ever go u r mine the only one.
By every I hate you they tried to tell you
I can never love anyone the way I love u.
By every I don't need you,
They meant I breathe only when I see u.
By every "I am OK" after a pause too long,
They meant I wish I could tell you whats really wrong.
By every "it happens I understand" they actually asked you,
How on earth could you ?
Think about it and tel me if you can? that it's not true
By every bye they silently said like the drizzle before rain
I cant wait til i will see you again
There is no oxford to understand these simple words
But the ones who still do so almost win 2 worlds
I just meant to say its the end
But I actually meant, we shall meet someday at some bend!
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very nice. sounds like felt and written
ReplyDeletethx mo .... der was actually a one line thought
ReplyDelete" der is a little truth behind evry jus kidding, a little concern behind every i don care" i loved the thought and this one is inspired by that
this is fab...the emotions r jus flowing i loved the last few lines specially...." i jus meant to say its the end but i actually meant we shall meet someday at some end".. keep the good work goin..hope to read more n remember to mail me when u release ur book will be there to get a signed copy...from the best writer..
ReplyDeleteThx a lot girl...... that was so sweet .... i guess that was a lil too much don no if best but i ll write one n gift u :)
ReplyDeleteit is something very true and happens in day to day life but we ppl dont think over it and u have got tht brains to put tht in words so keep tht up... good one......i loved it throughly....
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ReplyDeletei m glad that u guys loved it... comments lik these really keep me going...and btw i m open for constructive crticism guys lol but yeah u can sugar coat it a litlle lol jus kidding ;)
ReplyDeleteIts just awesome barkha. In my initial days of advertising my boss used to say. Whatever the client tells as a problem is actually not the problem. Read in between the lines. And u just reminded me of those days with these. So very nice please keep the good work going. you are rocking
ReplyDeleteHey Don is that you ??? lol I guess its very much u coz u said u posted comments whats with this name??? anyways thx a lot for ur complements :)
ReplyDeleteThis poem reminds of the earlier mis understanding tht i used to hav wit my parents regarding curfews and ground rules.....never knew to read between lines then!! Anyway babe as usual an uncommon thought put across in ur super cool signature style :)
ReplyDeleteVaish thx a lot :)... but with a grin :( btw u no what the only relation that was on ma mind when i was writing this one was frds .. we laugh,play,bully,fight and in the process say a lotta these things without meaning it
ReplyDeleteThis poem holds true for any kinda relation.. smtyms we say smthng n the other person perceives smthng else...d beginning of misunderstandings...only d deepest n thickest pals wil never hv such probs.. like we 4 ryt??? :)
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ReplyDeleteyes honey :) and at least sheetu and I have fought and made up touch wood in no time coz we always knew what the intent was behind all those screaming msgs or arguments :)wat say sheets ?
ReplyDeleteSimple lines with deeper thoughts.......Nice work
ReplyDelete@ Anonymous follower- thx :)
ReplyDeletegood observation has made u think this way..gud one..i can relate to this easily coz many ppl including my bro n most importantly my frenz hav alwayz misunderstood me whn i want to change them n the kind of life they r living..they alwayz dnt understand the concern i hav fr them..the first para n last para r the best...
ReplyDelete@ Ashish Bhaiya - Thx again:)Yes concern is many a times taken in other ways and sm times reading b/w lines is important:) And Actually appreciate that u read so many poems and left comments! Made my day!
ReplyDeletethis one is really good,well written,easily connectable....nice work
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